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Low angle tracking through blowing dust toward a lone nomad facing massive scrap-metal city gates at sunset. Camera rises as wind intensifies.
Hard cut: side orbit. Gates begin closing with heavy metallic force. Nomad steps forward into the storm, coat whipping. Watchtower lights snap on one by one, scanning.
Hard cut: telephoto from behind. Spotlight instantly locks onto him. In the distance, a massive sandstorm rapidly approaches, wind shifts violently toward the city.
Hard cut: tight front close-up. Goggles reflecting gates and storm. Dust hits lens. Sound peaks.
Cut to black just before the gates fully shut.